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1. Noirfifre says:

   February 19, 2015 at 5:22 pm

   You using the sound of the lion and adjective associated with that animal made me pause. That was a good effect, like a subtle command. Did you use the shape of a lion’s head? I can see one, if not them I am coco for coco puffs :P.

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   1. Mo says:

      February 19, 2015 at 9:50 pm

      Thank you very much! I wasn’t really going the Lion’s head perse more like his paw and scratch marks (the aftermath of his power) but if you interpreted something different that is awesome!

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      1. Noirfifre says:

         February 20, 2015 at 9:46 am

         The power of an imagination.

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         1. Mo says:

            February 20, 2015 at 10:27 am

            🙂

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2. nicholeq says:

   February 19, 2015 at 9:45 pm

   I like this. (I’m probably a little biased as I wrote about the Lion and the Lamb https://nicholeq.wordpress.com/ ) But i do think that your words and how you arranged them helped me to feel the power of the Lion and his ROAR!

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   1. Mo says:

      February 19, 2015 at 9:53 pm

      Thanks! I love lions and im crazy about the Lion of Judah so it was an easy source of inspiration. I would love to check out more of your pieces as we bond over our love of poetry and the One that roars in our lives.

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      1. nicholeq says:

         February 19, 2015 at 9:56 pm

         Ditto!

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